Saturday, March 14, 2009

-The Gentle Blue Rain-

Crap for my S&P assignment...sick of it...

The Gentle Blue Rain

The gentle blue rain
Fell on the big red train
Then swam along the black drain
Into the great green plain.

In the plain they saw
A big brown dog with a big jaw
And his big yellow paws
With sharp silver claws.

So they ran along the orange hill
till they reach the purple mill
The air was super cool and chill
“Ha Chill!” they all got ill!


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my name is KARL said...

u wrote dis???

quite impressed! hehehe

keep it up

kyox said...

yea i wrote it...thx~~

Jci aka Kei said...

karl sounds disbelieving... hahahaha

y are u sick of it by the way?

kyox said...

arh...lazy to explain..hehehe

Jci aka Kei said...

i think u've got some new things to write on if u want... some thing from home??

kyox said...

no tq~~

♥♥me ~ cik sara said...

nicely written la kyox..not crap.. sick of s&p toooo~..

kyox said...

thx sara~~~still, i call wat i wrote as crap~~lolz..

haha..i thought s&p suppose to be nice...